Gemstone Petals

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What is love? Love is standing on a boat in the middle of the ocean with the whales songs reaching through the timber and drenching the air around with its mellow tones. What is love? Love is looking down from the top of a mountain and seeing the clouds under your feet as you feel weightless and you stand amidst the heavens.
What is love? Love is laying in a grassy meadow cushioned by the moss while the sweet, delicate scent of the flowers settles on your skin and clothes in a gentle mist.
What is love? Love is a star strewn sky vast in proportions filling your sight with thousands of tiny gemstones each sparkling in its minute elegance
What is love? Love is standing in a field in early morning with the dew lying lightly on the flower petals reflecting each tiny glimmer of light and color as the earthy smell encompasses your mind.
ive never been in love i can tell u tht but ive just created this from what i think it shoudl be

absolutely loverly poem

envigorates all your senses and good use of poetic devices.

could maybe include sybalance, or alliteration sumhwere or simile or metaphor to develop the impact of the imagery for example on 2nd last line where u mention glimmer of light could describe in “like a thousand tiny crystals glistening in the summer sun” or something

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