Beautiful Iridescent
what do you think of my poem?
I want to submit it to a poetry cometition for under 20s
please; any advice is welcome.
Long since forgotten
The solemn azure steeple,
clings to branches of warped ivy.
Terrible neglect lets tiles,
Shiver off the once beautiful dome.
Twilight now broken, iridescent.
They came from the east,
Scimitars gleaming in the sun.
Cutting down the remains of the old.
its meant to be about the fall of the byzantine empire…
That’s hot dude. Straight fire
Beautiful iridescence clouds- April 9, 2011
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